5/8/2023 0 Comments Desolate City by Racquel JonesThat being said, I don't feel like this book was written with the reader in mind. There is a fine line between babying your readers and expecting them to be able to read your mind. Calling them Haydens didn't and doesn't make much of a difference because a few characters refer to Haydens as supernatural beings anyway. I think it's a really cute effort to be different but it was kinda just.yeah. Instead of calling supernatural creatures supernatural creatures, Jones calls them Haydens. Especially when you have elements in your book that are Supernatural. Whether it's even on Earth or in this universe. But it didn't stay that way.Īlbertos isn't in the USA but Jones never mentions where exactly it is. High school setting, the characters seemed interesting enough, albeit I was only about five pages in. But sadly, I didn't like it very much at all. There are gaps in the plot, one dimensional characters, words being used in the wrong context, typos and just - it was too much for a 238 page book. I'll start off by saying that this book is a grammatical mess.
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